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Angelina Engel a writing forum acquaintance read it. She emailed me and said, "I just finished reading your fantastic story and find it excellent! Your wording, your creativity and your mystery form kept me enthralled! You are one heck of a writer and it is such an honor to read your marvelous work! Thanks so much again for sending it to me."

Though I'm certain most woman will relate to this nineteenth century feminist, a man turned the pages of  "Rose, Ma Petite." He emailed me this: “I felt compelled to tell you of my opinion the minute I finished your book. And that opinion is simply: Absolutely wonderful. And it wasn't so much that the novel had a catchy or particularly conventional plot -- with conventional plot points, catchy gimmicks, and contrivances -- so much as it was the simple, rich, wonderfully honest unfolding of a person's life and those who were in it. Your descriptions of things also were enjoyable: succinct and un-wordy, yet definitely with a sense of a careful choice of words and rhythm -- elegance evinced by simplicity and honesty.”

A tennis friend's wife, an erudite lady who reads three books weekly, read it. She passed it back with a note. "Dear Walker, thoroughly enjoyed reading about Rose. Really nice to read about a heroine who never got into trouble of any kind. Not like most historical novels where you had to worry about what was going to happen next. With all that happened in one year, you could really make a series of books about Rose.

Interesting she should say that. I have written a sequel. "Dual Images - Saint and Sinner" that starts where the first novel ends. It's told by Rose's Great Granddaughter Shirley of "That Neapolitan Furlough" fame. If you've read that one, you already know who the sinner is.

Rose, Ma Petite

Synopsis

"Rose, Ma Petite" is a heartwarming saga about an unusual woman set in Nineteenth Century Paris, New Orleans and the Atlantic Ocean. Readers admire her nature, envy her beauty, and marvel at her adventures. Her handsome brother, though highly unlikely, falls in love with an affluent Parisian and marries her.

ROSE RÉNAUD, an indigent villager, comes to Paris in 1863 seeking fame and fortune—a certainty with her beauty and brains. She’s a fledgling and pure as Mary, the Mother of Christ. She becomes, however, a beloved tease in Paris’ sidewalk cafés. Paris is obsessed with diversity. It has never been so naughty and delightful. And Emperor Louis Napoleon III is the trendsetter.

Sitting in a sidewalk café with Brother MAURICE, influential FRANÇOISE HAUSMAN and her French Poodle stroll by. Peppé pulls free and runs away. Maurice chases, captures and returns him. This happenstance meeting ignites their tender love affair, which is woven throughout this rags to riches story. The Renauds' indigent lives are changed forever.

Through Rose's eyes painter Edouard Manet and poet Charles Baudelaire come to life at the swanky Café Maison Dorée. You are saddened by their hopeless plight. Through Maurice's eyes Emperor Louis Napoleon III and Eugénie are viewed at the opera house. And you learn why he leaves his opera box often.

Rose uses Françoise’s friendship to finagle an assignment in New York and New Orleans much to the chagrin of her lecherous boss. Traveling by train to Le Havre, Rose meets JOHN CHURCHILL, a handsome, wealthy, erudite Englishman. He’s sailing for America on the same steamer. Rose is thrilled with the possibilities.

Crossing the Atlantic Rose experiences the glitter and festive activities of a luxury voyage complete with a host of interesting characters. A romantic affair ensues between her and John, and the Atlantic Ocean becomes Cupid’s Garden of Eden, but the romance doesn’t crystallize. They realize that they became too close of friends to fall in love.

In New York, her elderly boss dies suddenly. He's dissipated the entire voyage. The other Rose was simply too evil, too young, too much for him. Young Rose has been catapulted to great importance. Her mission to sell bonds to continue modernizing Paris is highly successful. The Emperor is pleased.

On her train sojourn from New York to St. Louis, she meets a troubled Union Army major. He's headed for battle grounds in Virginia: the bloodiest of the Civil War. He’s married and she comforts from afar.

Boarding a paddle wheeler in St. Louis bound for New Orleans, a horrifying near accident brings MICHAEL RODON, a rich Spanish restaurateur, into her life. Romance is ignited and the flame grows steadily higher during the cruise down the Mississippi. An accident occurs near Memphis. This is fortunate. Rose has several more days to establish a solid relationship with Michael.

New Orleans is recovering from the ravages of the Civil War. There, she’s promoted to Assistant Controller and ordered to stay until the 50,000 bales of cotton she's tasked to buy are shipped to France. She knows she’ll never leave. She opens a custom dress shop and pursues her design talents. During the year that follows, their romance matures and they marry. You sigh when, on their wedding night, apprehension turns to bliss. Maurice marries Françoise and becomes wealthy. Rose’s youthful dreams have been realized. Her wonderful life with Michael is beginning.

The epilogue rushes Rose to death’s door. Before she dies at eighty-nine, her life with Michael passes before her eyes.

DEDICATION

To Marjorie my deceased wife of 48 years who loved this novel.

To my deceased erudite sister Frances Jackson Smith, who helped me in the beginning.  She was known as Mema to two adorable granddaughters. She wrote this poem in memory of our mother:

~ ESTELLE ~

 She had eyes of night

Hair black as soot

A twinkle and a saucy grin

Her mind rapier keen.

Lost child with no mother

Dependent on love from other kin

She grew to be full of insight

Adaptable to changing scene.

Coping became her forte

Making do with what was on hand

Becoming her own person

Clinging only to God and right.

Life was filled with challenge

She met it with steely will

Becoming much beloved

The recipient of respect and esteem.

Those who loved her will never forget

The challenges she set for them

A disciplined, but caring taskmaster

She taught her own with wisdom and care.

ROSE, MA PETITE

By Walker Joe Jackson

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Chapter 1

"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices in the truth. [Love] always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always preserves." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

Rose Rénaud's anxious eyes swept le Gare de Montparnasse boarding platform and viewed strangers idling about the platform. She glanced at her watch. "Where is he?" she fussed. "He promised to meet me here at three o'clock." Her watch had shown 3:21 p.m. Her irritation heightened.

Rose boarded the train at Brenton, France, near the English Channel, where she was born and nurtured for eighteen years. But she had lived a childhood of near poverty without an awareness. God touched her mother’s womb and endowed Rose with a generous and warm heart. He instilled genius and imagination in her mind and imparted great energy to her spirit. He blessed her five-feet-four-inch petite frame with perfection. She was vivacious and beautiful. God's perfect gift to man.

She was witty, intelligent, and knowledgeable, having read extensively. Eloquent French gushed from her sumptuous lips. She spoke English with a French accent. She had celebrated her eighteenth birthday five days earlier on July 10, 1863. She had come to Paris, this Sunday, to find work and search for a suitable -- handsome, erudite, and rich -- man to marry. Her potential for success was immense. She was such a desirable creature.

Brenton was a farming and fishing village located on a serene peninsula. In the mid-nineteenth century, farming implements and fishing methods were primitive. Harvesting a living from the earth and sea was laborious, unpredictable, and the sea could be treacherous. Her father, Antoine, did both, but he fished to earn a living. He gardened and raised animals for meat, milk, eggs, and butter. The seven acres, surrounding their small farmhouse, was taxed relentlessly to yield sufficient nourishment for him, wife Marie, and four growing children. Fish caught were sold or bartered for other necessities and staples.

Josephine and André were younger and still in school. The time would come when they would go to Paris to find fame, fortune, or more poverty. More promise waited in Paris than in a small village where farmers took pigs and cattle to the fountains of Saint Nicodemus to protect against diseases. And a French Poodle named Missy and workhorse named Jobe needed to be fed and cared for.

The locomotive hissed to a stand still. The inertia pushed Rose forward detaching her flower-patterned bonnet, covering glistening dark, black hair, which lay in ringlets well below her shoulders.

Passengers were busy retrieving luggage and personal items purchased during their sojourn on the Normandy coast. She was preoccupied with thoughts of her brother’s failure to meet her, and did not noticed. She was counting on Maurice helping her get settled. He had promised to arrange suitable lodging with a respectable Catholic family.

Now, Rose was worried and frightened. Evil and danger spread the length and breadth of Paris. She knew no other living soul in Paris. Fortunately, her parents had not neglected her worldly education. They had informed her of the pimps and dandies parading the boulevards, train stations, and cafés. She knew about the Sicilian kids roaming the city looking for loose purses to snatch or pockets to pick. She had brought her life savings, sixty-one francs. It was wrapped safely around her waist three layers deep. And she knew of the madams who scouted train stations looking for young, helpless, farm girls to recruit for their brothels.

Mindful that exiting passengers scurried down the aisle, she stood and waited for an approaching middle-aged gentleman to allow her to enter the aisle. He wasn’t carrying a bag, and she knew he would come to her aid. Men fell over backward being courteous to Rose, and she took full advantage of their chivalrousness. She felt a sense of power. Even as a schoolgirl, she enjoyed leading boys along and disappointing them. Rose was a colossal tease; however, she had no inclination toward arrogance. She was a wholesome country girl and thankful her being was attractively arranged. She was a devout Catholic, believing in every sacrament of the church.

"Mademoiselle, have you no one to help?" he inquired in fluent French laced with twangs of cockney. His unctuous, dark-blue eyes mirrored a pair of alert dark-brown eyes. He looked beyond her lovely face.

"It is true, Monsieur." Her voice was high in tone, but soft and sweet.

"Have you a traveling case, Mademoiselle?"

"Oui, Monsieur. It is the large one above."

She stepped aside. He reached above and groaned audibly as he delivered the case to the floor. For his size and age, he had strained excessively. Undoubtedly, he hung around too many London public houses, and his physical fitness was wanting.

"Mademoiselle, you are carrying gold? The 'bloody' thing weighs a ton."

"Non, Monsieur. I wish. Merci."

The passenger car emptied while they engaged in meaningless introductions. His name was Sir Walter Johnson, and he claimed to be a Member of Parliament. He said he had come to the Continent for a fortnight holiday. Rose did not believe him and refused his dinner invitation. She told him her brother was meeting her soon. The news came as a bitter disappointment to Sir Walter, but he assisted her off the train and into the waiting area. Then, he vanished. Quite conceivably he had a daughter her age.

The waiting room stifled. The clippedy-clop of hoofs of steel and the clack of carriage wheels, echoing from the street, was an additional annoyance. The gnats and flies were even peskier.

Rose occupied a seat in the middle of a long wooden bench. Her visage was forlorn and perplexed, while wondering what to do. She found a train schedule and folded it to fan with. She had been still for minutes when she viewed mademoiselle approaching. She had just entered the waiting room from the street, and Rose hoped she brought word from her brother. She felt sudden elation. Then, she looked closer.

She observed some woman in her late twenties, with doleful eyes, who would pass for forty. She viewed purple hair, the redness of her face, the heavy black mascara on her eyebrows and matching eye shadow around her eyes. She espied with unadulterated disgust the décolleté cut of her bodice and the shortness of her skirt, which flaunted sheer-black hose.

"Ma Cherie, you look sad and abandoned." Her voice was mellifluously phony.

Rose elected to ignore her. She thought she might be a madam.

The woman sat. Rose smelt strong perfume mixed with the stench of body odors, and she could clearly see the jewelry cluttering her wrists and fingers were cheap imitations. Rose slid to the end of the bench.

This dreadful creature is too crude to be a madam. She’s a lowly streetwalker.

Rose's move and the long period of silence, which the floozy interpreted as indifference, brought a frown of perplexity to the floozies' face.

The quirk in Rose's nature, the one possessing her to tease boys controlled her, and she decided to play along. Rose's nature was filled with wonder and curiosity. "It is true. My brother has forsaken me."

"Do not fret, Ma Cherie. I'll be your friend. You may come to my home." She smiled cunningly.

"Why would you want to befriend a total stranger?"

"You are pretty. I like pretty girls."

"But you’re a prostitute."

"Oui, Mademoiselle. But I make love to men only for their money. I don't gain satisfaction -- not as much as I feel making love to a beautiful woman such as you." Her voice was filled with sensual hunger.

Rose's education was less than thorough. Mama had forgotten to tell her about lesbians. She was both surprised and amused. She couldn't understand why a woman would want to make love with another woman. She'd never had such feelings or thoughts, and she couldn't conceive of how they might go about it. Her curiosity sought enlightenment. "Mademoiselle, how does a woman make love to another woman?"

"Come with me to my flat, Cherie, and I will show you." The prostitute's eyes flashed desire. She reached across and took Rose's hand. It was vexation, and Rose thought she'd been too bold. As though a guardian angel looked over Rose, she heard a familiar voice from behind.

"Sister Rose, I am sorry to be late."

She turned. Seeing Maurice's sanguine, placid face, relief washed over her, then warmth. The prostitute, realizing her mark lost, stood, and sauntered away, back to the streets, absinthe, syphilis, and total despair.

Rose stood to greet Maurice. They embraced briefly. He kissed her on both cheeks. "You are late, brother, and I am furious," she said, with a blistering tongue, while staring into his dark-blue, almost black eyes. Maurice had grown a pencil moustache, and she thought it added charm to an already charming and wildly expressive face.

"Forgive me, Rose, I was short of money and could not afford a cab. The walk from the center of Paris was much farther than I thought." He sounded apologetic, as he sat in the spot the harlot had just vacated.

Maurice was twenty-one. He was a handsome man by any standard. He stood a fraction of an inch under six feet, and he was sinewy. His athletic body developed playing sports. Working as a carpenter eleven hours a day building Emperor Napoleon's dream city, had also been beneficial.

Being the oldest male sibling, Maurice helped Papa with the gardening, the animals, and the nets. The sea air around Brenton and wholesome country living had added sanguine to his high cheeks. Fortunately, the black smoke of industry and the stench of open sewers, prevalent in his Paris, had not paled his healthy facial hue.

"We go now?" asked Maurice. "I have arranged lodging for you with a respectable Catholic family. The master of the house works with the Ministry. He has a clerk job for you, if you are agreeable?"

"Oui! We will see. Maurice, I have cab money."

He sighed and took the heavy case in hand. They walked toward the street entrance.

July afternoons in Paris were delightful and today was exceptionally so. The afternoon air was fresh and sweetened with fragrances of summer flowers. The prevailing breeze blew the stench of raw sewerage another direction and controlled insects. Puffy clouds frolicked through the azure sky, hiding the bright summer sun for short periods. It was the perfect day for an open carriage ride.

A line of carriages waited. Passing five tired, overworked, and underfed mares and geldings, Rose grimaced at the sight. Roofs of all the carriage were retracted. Rain was impossible. They reached the first in line, and the driver alighted, relieving Maurice of the case. He put it in the rear of the carriage and returned to open the gate for them. After taking the driver’s position, he looked back sharply. "Where to, Monsieur?"

"Thirteen Rue St. Victor."

"Oui!" A pop of his whip and the thin, red horse strained to break the static friction of the carriage wheels and top the irregularity of the cobblestones, and they moved away down the Boulevard Montparnasse.

Carriage traffic was light. Sidewalks were busy. Sunday was a day off for most Parisians, and their time uncompressed. People in this mode preferred walking to riding even if they possessed the fare, but few did. An occasional family passed. The children played roughhouse under scrutiny of their mother.

Tourist engaged commercial carriages. They had come to indulge the sordid pleasures abundant on a gay Paris evening. But a few came to enjoy the cultural endowments of Paris: the Louvre, gourmet cuisine’s, cruises on the Seine, magnificent orchestras in concert, and great literature.

Occasionally, a sewer rat darted across the road, proving that no day can be perfect. Rose, observing the flight of the rat was amused, remembering an article in Le Moniteur about the indestructibility of Paris' rats. It had said, "Empress Eugénie, wife of Louis Napoleon III, ordered cheese-flavored ground glass poured into rat holes to kill them, and they found it delicious."

Rose sat, mouth agape, quietly admiring the lush greenery blanketing the trees and shrubs. Paris was inundated with new growth that follows the advent of spring. The tall buildings along the boulevard seemed to touch the clouds. Birds, flying overhead, sang for the joy of life, and those in the trees sang to their helpless young. The offspring had been prolific and the bitter cold of winter long forgotten. Life was easy and necessities of life were plentiful. Predator birds weren’t stalking nests because of the abundance. Maurice was tired and the tranquility lulled him to light repose.

Rose spotted the prostitute who had attempted to engage her. She sat at a sidewalk café with a portly, bearded man. The carriage neared. Loud laughter overwhelmed street noises, and she wondered, with wild imagination, what everyone found so humorous. The boisterous gaiety was intoxicating. She had yearnings to dismiss the immediate course and join the happy throng. Rose had never observed such carefree conviviality. She was addicted now.

Maurice stirred. He yawned, stretched, and observed Rose's sparkling eyes dancing from table to table. "Rose, Paris is fanatically gay in summer. Love is everywhere. Sidewalk café, such as that, are numerous along the great boulevards. People flock to their tables to enjoy cool drinks and gossip. Voyeurism is incessant."

"Maurice, take me to one?" Rose asked, with an eagerness that was infectious.

"Oui, but you must get settled first."

The carriage turned left onto Rue St. Victor and stopped at the curb. Adjacent to the carriage, Rose viewed a large, two-story house. It needed a fresh coat of paint but the red roof looked fit.

"Monsieur, this is Thirteen Rue St. Victor."

"How much is owed?" asked Maurice.

"Thirty centimes, three-tenths of a franc, Monsieur."

Rose opened her purse and found the fare. She passed it to Maurice, who paid the driver the exact amount. Times were desperate for many, and gratuities were not part of poor people's culture. Parisians could hardly feed, clothe, and house their families on the four francs the average earned for an eleven hour day. The driver alighted and fetched the case to Maurice, and they walked toward the house.

Reaching the door, Maurice knocked. An elderly woman appeared wearing a warm and inviting smile. You could tell she had been beautiful, but corpulence came with age and birth of four children, who’d left the nest years earlier. Her gray-green eyes were engaging; her voice low pitched and understated. "Ah! 'Tis you Maurice, and the pretty one must be Rose. Entrez," she said sweetly, and invited with a sweeping wave of her arm and hand.

"Oui. Rose, let me introduce Madame Mollot."

"My pleasure, Madame Mollot." Rose bowed slightly.

Madame Mollot gave her a motherly hug. "Please call me Loraine, Ma Cherie. I wish to feel young."

"Oui. It pleases me, Loraine."

"Come, I will take you to your room. It is on the second floor and fronts on the street. My two girls occupied it ‘til they found husbands -- more years ago than I dare or care to remember."

Maurice grabbed the huge case and grunted loudly. They followed Madame Mollot up the stairs. The room was left and in the rear near the bathroom. Maurice placed the case near the foot of the large, four-post bed and proceeded removing the straps securing it. Rose strolled to the bed and lay upon it, sighed, and rose to her feet.

"Is it to your liking, Rose?" Loraine asked sweetly.

Rose nodded.

"The mattress, pillows, and linen are new. We wanted everything to be nice for you. If you would care to freshen up, pitchers in the bathroom are filled with fresh water. Maurice, join me for a cup of café, s'il vous plaît. It is freshly brewed. Rose, please join us at your earliest convenience." Maurice nodded his approval and accompanied Loraine to the parlor downstairs.

The moment the door closed Rose started unbuttoning clothes frenziedly. She sighed joyfully each time a layer was removed and placed on the bed. She hesitated a moment before removing the halter. Dressed only in panties, her firm breast jiggled as she moved to the gilded mirror on the opposite wall.

The mirror dripped antiquity. Had it a tongue it might tell how much it relished reflecting Rose's lovely figure. She admired herself briefly. She combed long black hair with delicate strokes then returned to find fresh clothes within the case. Her search was for light apparel less modest than the clothes she had removed.

After dressing in the peignoir, she went to the bathroom to wash. The water was cold and she shivered. Her nipples hardened with the touch of the cold, rough bath cloth. She returned to the bedroom and perfumed her body. Before dressing in fresh apparel, she transferred ten francs from her waist purse to her hand purse. She buried the waist purse in the case and left to join Loraine and Maurice in the drawing room below.

She found them sitting at a round table circled by four chairs set in the middle of the room. The sun dwelled at a forty-five degree angle and sunlight streamed through two long, wide windows dressed with colorful draw curtains. The room was small and cozy, although a large mirror on the left wall imparted a feeling of largeness and added animation. The real charms were the variety of unique knickknacks tastefully positioned. Two bookcases, one on each side of the fireplace, were filled with books. Two oil lamps bedecked the mantel of the fireplace.

Above the fireplace, a large family portrait drew Rose's attention at once. Papa and Mama stood in the middle of two daughters on their right and two sons on their left. The portrait had been painted when the children were tots, and Rose's appraisal of Madame Mollot had been correct, beautiful. Monsieur Mollot stood tall and handsome with powerful shoulders and an interesting face highlighted by piercing dark-black eyes. The painting depicted a family endowed with great beauty and charm. The children had inherited their parent’s handsome appearances.

Loraine turned to her and smiled. "Rose, how do you take your café?"

"Black, s'il vous plaît."

Loraine poured the steaming coffee into the cup before Rose and offered to replenish Maurice's cup. "Non, merci. I have had far too much cafés today. I will be up tonight several times as it is."

Loraine passed the bowl, containing lumps of brown sugar, and Rose reluctantly took one. Lately, she had been drinking coffee without any enrichment, but she made the exception, hoping the gain of quick energy. She watched her waistline constantly, with marvelous results. A man with big hands could clasp his hands around Rose's waist and many had wished for an invitation. She had a serious countenance when she broke the silence. "Loraine, how much will you be asking for my lodging?"

Loraine appeared taken aback by the question. "Ma Cherie, Phillipe, my husband, and I discussed that matter. I remember we decided four francs a fair weekly sum. We'll offer you breakfast in the morning, and your other dining will be at your own discretion. I wish he were here. His work kept him late. They are quite busy at the Préfect's Office with all the construction that’s in progress. Emperor Napoleon enthusiasm will not be quenched until he shames all the great European cities or bankrupts France."

Rose took four francs from her purse and passed it to Loraine. "Please let me know if this amount isn’t correct?"

"Merci, Rose. Phillipe would like to discuss employment with you later tonight. A clerk position is open at the Préfect's Office. The compensation is equitable, and the hours reasonable."

"Oui. I have sincere interest, Loraine. I will plan to be home around nine. Maurice has promised to take me to a sidewalk café so we might partake of the gaiety that abounds in such places."

"How delightful. You are dressed appropriately for the occasion. With your beauty, you are lucky to have a strong brother to protect you from the wits, dandies, and boulevardiers who stalk these places." She smiled shyly.

A quick grin twitched the corners of Maurice's mouth. "If anyone needs protecting, Loraine, it is I. Have you forgotten about the ladies of questionable virtue who also haunt these establishments?"

"Oui, Maurice, but you have your Catholic goodness to protect you."

What a joke, Maurice thought restraining a smile. "I'm also young and virile."

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